First off, your site loaded extremley slow. It could just be my computer but I almost instantly disregarded it when it didn't load initially.
Is this in flash? Not everyone has flash installed.
Your background has the Ford logo; do you have their approval for this? It's a bit nit picky but I figure I'd point it out.
Your resume essentially says "I can draw" on it in multiple places. I think it's safe to say if you mention "Drawing" as one of your first skills then you don't necesarilly need to mention "Drawing weapons, vehicles..etc". It comes off redundant. Also your objective statement reads funny to me, but that's just my opinion.
Finally, in my opinion (take it or leave it, it's your work, if you like it keep rocking it), it has a very...Michael Bay feeling to it. If that makes any sense. Lots of flare. Lots of flash. Lots of things that distract me from what I'm really there for: to look at your content.
Make friends. Make games. Make money.