You can post it here too. No guarantee that you'll be happier with your feedback!
Originally Posted by timlaw347
1. unfortunately this is one of the places my 'story turned adaption from advice' never got through without the 'where's the game mechanics' belt down.
2. Classic moment of a forum who you have to pay money for to pitch your idea to for 'help and advice'.
1. Well, if you post in their Game Design forum, yes - for sure. But if you post in their Writing forum, the question of game mechanics shouldn't come up.
2. You don't have to pay to use that forum.