Starting a blog with columns and reviews (good AND bad games), try to get work published for other websites such as this one. Get your work out there.
Other points, in EVERYTHING you write that is public and 'on show' including forum posts.
1. Portal- amazing game and really initive
2. Gears of war- just the grpahics, and the gameplay are amazing, although the story could be better and the weak end
3. Bioshock- i LOVE this game the art style is just really really good and it works so perfectly.
4. MGS3- this game has the best most immersive story i h-+ave ever played and while it may not be for everyone (very weird) it is great.
5. Bunrout 3- while this is not the best game in the sereis (that is paradise)
it is the fastest and most arcadey
too many toehrs tbh but those ones rule (Y)
There a ton of grammar (lack of capitals) and spelling errors in this other reply of the forum you have made. Also, limit or even better, remove all abbreviations/Internet slang/emotions to present yourself as more 'professional' and serious about your writing.