Looking for Feedback

[Torkil]

Hi, I'm an aspiring games journalist/critic and I'm looking for some feedback on the work I've done so far. Everything I've done can be found at http://irrationallyirritated.blogspot.com/.
I've attempted a fairly casual and lighthearted writing style, aiming mainly to produce work that's easy to read, entertaining and perhaps even informative.

Thanks for your time.